Wednesday, May 19, 2010

adios

my heart says what im doin is wrong
mind says its right
im confused in here
dunno to take which side

life has brought me here today
i have no fear
dunno if it'll stay this way
its a roller-coaster ride

it's too late
I believe
time to leave
time to say
cheerios, adios
im gonna miss you my friend

torn between friendship and love
how can i choose one
hang on, let me take this slow
it is better said than done

close your eyes
close your ears
hold your thoughts
be in my shoes
what do you feel
what will you do
tell me what to mend

i am bad at taking decisions
lived my whole life making assumptions
why cant you make it clear
lemme kno your intentions

I can't see
you hurt again
dont want to be
the cause of pain
so, cheerios.. Adios
nothing more to say, the end
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14 comments:

  1. reenaApril 8, 2011 at 3:56 AM

    A honest confession here-one that touches the heart. Good writing .May you find all the answers to your questions.

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  2. AlcinaApril 8, 2011 at 4:14 AM

    Thats painful..the decision may not ever sound fair to none..The emotions were portrayed brilliantly and the title was so apt..

    Alcina

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  3. UnknownApril 8, 2011 at 4:34 AM

    great conveyance of feelings ...well done

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  4. Sri SriApril 8, 2011 at 5:49 AM

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  6. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 8, 2011 at 6:26 AM

    heartfelt words..enjoyed the flow.

    welcome,

    Happy Rally.

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  7. AnonymousApril 8, 2011 at 7:10 PM

    I find that they do say saying goodbye is an awful thing! Enjoy the rally!
    http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/

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  8. AnonymousApril 8, 2011 at 8:53 PM

    at "hold your thoughts" i pictured someone literally putting their hands on the sides of their head and trying to keep their thoughts from falling out.

    If this is based on a current real life situation, best of luck to you.

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  9. AnonymousApril 9, 2011 at 1:53 PM

    Nice... nice. Liked 'the end' part a lot. :D

    Cheers!

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  10. Vinay Leo R.April 12, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    its always difficult to choose between the two I think. friendship and love. wonder why its not possible for both to happen simultaneously! :)

    Rally Week 41 - My Poetry

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  11. AnonymousApril 12, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    From the heart- love it ;)

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  12. AnonymousApril 13, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Great words, glad I found your work.

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  13. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallApril 14, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    please return favors to poets who were here for you.

    enjoy encouraging poets, getting encouraged.

    cheers.

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  14. AlcinaApril 15, 2011 at 11:05 PM

    Was very nyc work..so have nominated u for outstanding poet of the poetry month :)

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