Thursday, April 14, 2011

Heaven

When I was in despair

When I thought life was not fair

When I cried out of rage

Because I couldn’t figure out the maze

Every hope doomed to fail

Loneliness prevailed

Horizon darkened

Crater deepened

I lost my faith

Stopped to breath

Closed my eyes, headed for an eternal sleep…..


A voice haunted my dreams

I woke up, my inside still screams

I opened my eyes

Wondered where was I

I was in heaven indeed


I heed a melody undaunted, a gleam

A verse no mortal could deem

A tune unblemished

The language angelic

Smooth like an endless stream


A song that would tranquilize a beast

A song that’s a luscious feast

A notion cherished

The theme therapeutic

Enigmatic like the sun of the east


A new crack of dawn

The dew on the lawn

Smile in the sky

I am on an isle that could fly

It’s a mystic land

Don’t want to know what’s beyond

I could reside here forever

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15 comments:

  1. MiaApril 20, 2011 at 11:02 AM

    i felt this deep down on my soul.

    Luna


    http://lunawitch15.wordpress.com/

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  2. JingleApril 20, 2011 at 5:49 PM

    very well expressed one.

    you rock.

    A++

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  3. Sri SriApril 21, 2011 at 6:42 AM

    @ luna : thanks so much
    @ jingle: thanks to you and thursdaypoetsrally. i was only concentrating on writing and composing tunes. your blogs inspired me to be a poet

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  4. Vinay Leo R.April 21, 2011 at 8:23 AM

    In our deepest fears and loneliest times, our dreams take us to a place where nothing but beauty exists :) and also, it is in melancholy that a poet breathes free the most, in my opinion of course :) thanks for the share; if this was wordpress, I'd have clicked the like button without any hesitation :)

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  5. AnonymousApril 21, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    This is heavenly. love it :)

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  6. AnonymousApril 21, 2011 at 9:41 AM

    Beautifully done. Your idea of heaven is a tranquil one of contentment--nice.

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  7. AnonymousApril 22, 2011 at 12:06 AM

    nice! my thursday post : http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/20/me-before-us/

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  8. AlcinaApril 22, 2011 at 6:18 AM

    The rhyming was just awesome..and the descriptive words you have used created a marvel..

    Alcina

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  9. AnonymousApril 22, 2011 at 11:02 AM

    Lovely and inspiring.I loved every word! Beautiful!

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  10. PaulamiApril 22, 2011 at 11:01 PM

    very striking indeed.

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  11. LiApril 23, 2011 at 1:31 PM

    Makes me think of all the times I watched the clock, willing the day to end so i could sleep and dream. Well done.

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  12. morgannaApril 25, 2011 at 7:48 PM

    Nice poem.

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  13. The PoetApril 26, 2011 at 8:46 AM

    Nicely done.

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  14. PaulApril 26, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    Good poem, great rhyme and flow

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  15. AnonymousApril 26, 2011 at 7:26 PM

    That's a great poem, especially the third stanza, great job.

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