Monday, March 15, 2010

You are an angel

you are an angel
from every angle
How is that i couldnt see
how blind i could be...

to let you go....

think of calling you every night
if u r wid me ma life's so bright
i was wrong, that y i had to hide
it was tough to decide

to let you go...

i wish it was a dream
i wil try to redeem
dont tell me to go away
giv me a chance let me stay


I know i broke your heart
still you loved me a lot
how is that i could'nt see
how blind i could be

to let you go

every small happiness denied
still u're patience personified
i was wrong,that y i had to hide
it was tough to decide

to let you go

i wish it was a dream
i wil try to redeem
dont tell me to go away
giv me a chance let me stay
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9 comments:

  1. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMay 4, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    love the sentiments, well penned.

    welcome and enjoy the rally.
    :)

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  2. PaulMay 5, 2011 at 4:04 AM

    Nice style - could be put to music easily. Thanks for sharing.

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  3. Uma AnandaneMay 5, 2011 at 5:12 AM

    well written and touching poem.

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  4. AnonymousMay 6, 2011 at 12:29 AM

    love the rhyme,,
    nice reading,,
    :)

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  5. AlcinaMay 6, 2011 at 2:58 AM

    Woha..the emotion portrayal is damn awesome..

    I could somehow witness the whole story in front of my eyes..

    Very nice write-up!

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  6. Bing YapMay 6, 2011 at 7:48 AM

    i can feel the emotion in this poem... very well written! :)

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  7. The PoetMay 6, 2011 at 1:25 PM

    Quite a touching piece.
    Thanks for sharing.

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  8. AmropaliMay 6, 2011 at 9:46 PM

    Ah!
    I maybe biased but I wish I got a get-back-to-me poem like that!
    :D

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  9. MeiroMay 8, 2011 at 5:38 AM

    You have a nice style, love it.

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